ElementMan2005
Trainie
The Elements Shall Awaken the Great Beast.
Posts: 49
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Post by ElementMan2005 on Dec 12, 2005 14:52:52 GMT -5
Name: Karisha
Primary weapon: Bronze Sword
Secondary weapon: Copper Sword
LVL:1 EXP:0 TNL:500
Metal:1000
HP:800
Element
Armor: Basic Amor
Attacks: Alpha) Fire Shot (140 dmg.) Beta) Fire Slam (140 dmg) Gamma) Knockout Fire (120 dmg-Unodgeable) Delta) Copper Shot (140 dmg.-) Epsilon) Bronze Slam (140 dmg.-)
Attacking Techs:
Defensive Techs
Shield Defence Tech Block a attack with a shield Blocks one attack, 2 time use
Speed Techs Skillful evasion Speed Tech dodges all attacks this turn using increadble speed dodges all attacks, 1 time use
Support Techs
Unequiped Tech Chips:
Items:
Bio:A historic Reploid unknown to most except his partner, Jaronian. After Jaronian died, Karisha set off on his own to destroy the Mavericks he hates.
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stefjenova
Administrator
Mercenary Extrordinaire
We settle this right here, and right now.
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Post by stefjenova on Dec 12, 2005 15:12:30 GMT -5
Ahoy Yama!
You start with no element and your attacks are pretty high powered...
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ElementMan2005
Trainie
The Elements Shall Awaken the Great Beast.
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Post by ElementMan2005 on Dec 12, 2005 15:14:42 GMT -5
done
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ElementMan2005
Trainie
The Elements Shall Awaken the Great Beast.
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Post by ElementMan2005 on Dec 12, 2005 16:03:09 GMT -5
Anyone gonna help me here..
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Axl
Elite Admin
Gun Slinger[/color]
BOO!...I scared my self...>_>
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Post by Axl on Dec 12, 2005 16:07:43 GMT -5
hey, your attacks should be around 140 DMg for sword...and -10-20 for each effect and attack has...and Plus 10-15 DMG for each turn of cooldown an attack ha...ok? so change that,,,and addeven a small Bio. and I think it is good.....oh and your EXP starts at 0
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stefjenova
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Mercenary Extrordinaire
We settle this right here, and right now.
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Post by stefjenova on Dec 12, 2005 16:08:23 GMT -5
By No element, that means even your attacks have no element. And the damages are still too high... I'd say drop each by 40-50 pts and you'll be better...
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ElementMan2005
Trainie
The Elements Shall Awaken the Great Beast.
Posts: 49
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Post by ElementMan2005 on Dec 12, 2005 16:13:49 GMT -5
Now
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Axl
Elite Admin
Gun Slinger[/color]
BOO!...I scared my self...>_>
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Post by Axl on Dec 12, 2005 16:16:11 GMT -5
ok, well...looks ok to me...welcome abourd.
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